Sun. Mar 9th, 2025
“Sun Through the Rain,” by Astrid Longstreth, 14, of West Bolton

Young Writers Project is a creative online community of teen writers, photographers and artists, which has been based in Vermont since 2006. Each week, VTDigger features the writing and art of young Vermonters who publish their work on youngwritersproject.org, a free, interactive website for 12- to 18-year-olds. To find out more, visit youngwritersproject.org, or contact Executive Director Susan Reid at sreid@youngwritersproject.org and 802-324-9538.

“Keep that ball off my lawn!” gives us the stereotype of the crotchety old man on his porch, shooing away innocent children rather than trespassers, but in reality the type to post up in front of their house on a fine summer’s day often turn out to be the most neighborly of all — not to mention observant. This week’s featured poet, Naomi Segal of Woodstock, takes a seat on her deck and watches as the world goes by.

Watching

Naomi Segal, 13, Woodstock

I am up 

with the sun. 

An ancient plate 

in danger of breaking 

holds pancakes 

and fruit.

I wait. 

I watch. 

The earliest wakers 

all have dogs. 

Later, 

large gaggles 

of kids 

meander 

toward the bus stop 

while their younger siblings 

race 

with too-big backpacks 

bouncing 

with every bound. 

Then 

there is quiet, 

pierced by bird conversation 

and babies crying 

on their walks 

with their parents. 

At lunch,

a field trip

in bright green t-shirts

wanders by.

Three o’clock

brings back yellow buses

and tired kids.

At 5, 

the ice cream truck 

lures kids 

to its jingling window.

More dog walkers

come by

and slowly

the day

ends

where

it

started.

My pancakes

took

all day

to eat,

and grew cold.

Now

I am back,

wrapped in a fleece blanket

on my porch.

Read the story on VTDigger here: Young Writers Project: ‘Watching’.

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